Sunday, December 18, 2011

Plz revise this short essay and make it flow thank you?

Jesus, the King of the Kings, came to earth to resurrect people. Before confessing, I thought God was in heaven and just looked over me once in a while. Therefore, I was the one who should guide and had to make a decision myself until believing Jesus. He actually came to earth to bestow a favor on evil spirit men. He didn’t have to die on cross, to wash the disciples’ feet, or to be spat out curses since we are all sinful people. But since “God so loved the world,” he gave his beloved son to this world to resurrect sinful people. In addition before going to heaven, Jesus states that Christians must serve non-Christians as Jesus did and make them believe Jesus.

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